Oh, you'd love some advanced critique today would'ya?! I have nothing to regret today so I'll be 100% advancing your depression then.

You could really practice drawing and try to make yourself better. One thing that especially got into my "irritation eye" is those damned ears. Like, OH MY FUCKING HOLY JESUS ANUS!!! They look like some weird fungus has eaten their ears off and has grown something funguslike on top of 'em. I was just kiddin'! What I'm trying to say is, that you simply need to watch an ear from different directions, draw, draw and draw it more, till you know how to draw it and all it's details with your eyes closed, with your left hand and finally...with a pen stuck inside your DilliDong while your hands are behind your neck. That's how I did it, now why wouldn't you do it like that 'eh? Mostly in all those ears, the basic shape is the biggest problem. It's like some invisible force is pulling violently their ears backward.

This goes with all your characters. There's that own style of yours to draw people and characters, but simply practising drawing real people and studying how their anatomy and angles of their limbs & fingers etc. work -should really help your works. These characters just look like they were made by a 16-year old highschooler. That is the most honest opinion you're going to get from me. Just like for an example,draw your chick man, think and stuff that wisdom in your drawings. I know you can do it man!

Now, RUN Forreeest! RUUuuuunnn!!!

Damn boy! You eat some special cereal today or what?! I think a glimpse of the good old I-crit-your-ass-to-kingdom-come-Saibankan just showed itself. Haven't seen that dude for a long time in here.

Yup, yup. 16-year old highschooler describes it quite well. I need to draw more, that's for sure. At some point I thought I should do the whole thing all over again, but then again, I'm too lazy. I still like parts of it though.

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I was just pissed off today, that's it. But I knew you'd appreciate my honesty since you asked for it. I've been thinking of getting rid of this Saibankan-profile and getting a new haircut. More professional one to be more accurate.

Why can't I just change my username Goddammit?! Stupid fucking DA. Now I just need to figure out how to erase this profile... Hmmm...there was that big titted cosplay lardass who gets enormously offended if I suggest a good titty-bang-bang...

Just go and give one of your famous "advanced critiques" to one of the admins and you're sure to get fired. I keep a more professional(is that possible?) profile in Conceptart.org. There's only a couple of things in that gallery, my DW3 contest work and that Haukikana thingamajig I did for my brother.

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conseptart.org's been always a place where I really haven't had the clue where to go in there. It's a really messy place and the pages take like forever to load. But maybe I could take a chance some day.

It's a bit weird yeah, but once you get the hang of it, it's quite simple.

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I really love how you did the black haired guy who looks a bit like an Indian. Nice piece it shows that you put a lot of work in it.

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That's one part of the piece I actually like. He's not actually an indian type character, but the books describe him looking like chiseled from stone with hard edges and somehow many of my dark haired drawings end up looking like indians. Weird, huh.

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Well, if I happen to become a conseptart.orgist someday I'll note ya.